Would better office space make life better?

[Carol High]

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Hi @carol-high! Did you have a question that you were trying to ask? ^ I don’t see your question. You are also posting in the LinkedIn Profile Feedback forum, are you needing feedback on your profile?

[Carol High]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/carol-high-b9126a4/edit/topcard/

• This reply was modified 5 years, 6 months ago by Carol High.

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Hi @carol-high, below is feedback on your profile:

For future reference, here is the correct link to your profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/carol-high-b9126a4/

Profile Photo: Great photo!! Very professional!

You also need a background photo. I want you to also email Lindsey and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under your name):

This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile. Let’s really make it POP.

How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

I like that you started off your summary asking pain point questions!

Also, your paragraphs are a bit chunky and need better organization. (check out the example I provided and look at the format which you can COPY)

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

You want to provide information that is:

Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you. It’s nice to educate them but not throughout the entire profile.

I also don’t want you to make a bullet list – instead write sentences but make it short.

Call To Action:

You need a better one.

If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂

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