WILMAS INFOMERCIAL NEEDS REVIEW PLEASE

[Wilma Mixon-Hall]

Hi,  please review and get back to me with edit suggestions0f7512d4-3f74-48f5-b138-1c919d672504-Infomercial

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[n d]

Hi @wilma-mixon-halls, you look great!! Did I ever get a chance to provide feedback on your script prior to filming? I just want to check.

[Wilma Mixon-Hall]

No it was impromtu, and I did not use my summary for the script.  I can however, refilm, thats why I am asking for feedback.  the summary seemed redundant, but what do I know???   LOL

[n d]

Hi @wilma-mixon-halls – I’d like to approve your script before you film again, if possible. I’m finding that there are a few gaps in what could be a powerful infomercial. Here is a fun template below to work from to help you organize your points better:

How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?

Want __________?

(after you ask 3 questions)

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

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