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Please provide feedback on my profile – https://www.linkedin.com/in/vernarbacon/
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Hi @verna-bacon!
Nice job taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Don’t forget to add your new photo and zoom in.
You also need a background photo, which you can email Lindsey about. Just share with her your field of business and she will create a background image for you.
Headline:
This needs some work. How about filling out this template and then copy and paste it in the headline spot:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
You need a lot more information in your summary to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
when you’re writing your testimonials, keep it SHORT. 1 sentence per testimonial.
You also need a better call to action. How about this:If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision 🙂
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