Vacation Home Ownership by the Beach

[Phil Ranger]

 

Considering a vacation home at the beach, harbor, or on the hill with an ocean/island view?  Second homes account for a substantial portion of real estate sales in coastal W. Ventura County.  Why?  It’s the most affordable coastal real estate from San Francisco to San Diego, in a small-town atmosphere, with uncrowded beaches.

Imagine cool ocean breezes, sand between your toes, a boat, kayak, or paddleboard beside your dock, or, enjoying sunrise and sunset from your hillside view deck.  Visualize such a lifestyle upgrade!

To save time, money, and eliminate the frustration, you need a competent Realtor with a simple, yet comprehensive plan tailored to your goals, timeline, and budget.  Let’s talk!  805-797-6308

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