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Hi @marie-wood, would you please provide a direct URL link to your LinkedIn page??
To do that:
- go to linkedin.com
- click on ‘me’ at the top right hand corner
- click on ‘view profile’
- and copy the URL in the address bar and please paste it below here so I can see
Thank you and super job!!
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Hi @marie-wood, thank you for providing that!!
Your profile photo, headline, and cover photo look FANTASTIC!
When I started reading your About me section, I didn’t’ immediately connect that you were helping your clients sell their home because it came off like you were training them.
Remove or reword: “If you are looking for training and experience” — are you training people??
The first 2 sentences are the most important, I would recommend asking 3 short and sweet (BUT POWERFUL) pain point questions and then lead into why they should work with you, who you work with, etc.
You can get inspiration from this profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
I hope this helps and please let me know when you’ve made the changes and i’ll take another look!
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Hopefully this is better. I’ll keep making changes until it’s right. Thanks!
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