3 years, 5 months ago-
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Here is my updated LinkedIn link: http://www.linkedin.com/in/therhetteffect2048
My LinkedIn set up is the older program so looked and organized differently than Matt’s example but updated where I could.
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Hi there, @rhett-cork! Thank you for submitting your profile for review 🙂 below are my comments for revision:
Good profile photo! Could you send it to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and have her add a white background for you? This will really help your photo look more up to date.
I also want you to have a better banner image that is better related to your field of work. Please email Lindsey, tell her your field of work, and she will create something custom for you.
Headline:
Right now, what you have written is “Realtor / Interior Designer” and based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
About Section:
Remove “message me” from the beginning of your sales letter. Your call to action will always be at the very end 🙂
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized and less about YOU and more about THEM!
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is another example: https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
You want to mention, who you work with, how you can help them, and why they should work with you.
Want ________?
NEED ______ but don’t know where to start?
Are you _________?
I help clients like YOU __________.
Essentially…
My clients etc etc.
Call to action (you need one at the very end):
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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