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https://www.linkedin.com/in/jpgrealest
WHAT CAN I DO FOR YOU IN 10 WORDS OR LESS?
Results-Driven, I deliver to you TOP DOLLARS from the sale of your property by using my twenty years of experience in handling all details of Real Estate Transaction in metro Denver, without pain or stress that usually builds up in the process of selling a home.
Who am I?
As a full-time bilingual Real Estate broker with fairly large Network that may benefit you, by getting top dollars from the sale of your property. More important, you will be informed about the process to give you peace of mind and to allow you to focus on packing to move to the new home.
What am I passionate?
One of my most essential passions is to help clients and their families providing First Class Service using my vast knowledge of Real Estate with wisdom, and loyalty to reach the most benefit in the sale of their homes.WHO ARE MY CLIENTS?
My service focuses mainly on families who are thinking to expand the size of their home due to an increase in the family member like having new kids or families who are want to downsize because they are becoming empty nester due to kids moving out to go school or forming a new family?
I am a results-driving person; usually, on my first meeting with you as a client, I listen to your needs to have a better notion of how I can help you. They could be many things, for instance getting a transfer to another Estate, having a new family member in the way, etc.
If you’re ready for an agent who delivers his promise, then message me here TODAY on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Message me. Cell phone 303 324 928 -
Hi @jaime-gomez, nice job taking action and submitting your profile for feedback!! I’m happy to help!
When I click on your profile link, it’s showing up as an error.
- go to linkedin.com
- click on ‘me’ at the top right-hand corner
- click ‘view profile’
- then, copy the URL in the address bar – this will send you right back to your profile and that is the URL that you send me
Feedback on your profile:
- once you send over the link, I’ll provide feedback on your profile photo, background photo, and headline
Jaime, what you have written is way too focused on you and your background rather than on what you do and how you help your client. Your formatting (spacing after paragraphs) needs some work.
Here’s what I’d love for you to do that will also make this easier for you.
COPY KENT’S ENTIRE SUMMARY =>
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
THEN, I want you to ADD in your own information where it fits. Okay?? Does that make sense??
This way, you can have the same structure and outline with YOUR information.
Send me a link of your profile once you get it!
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Hi @jaime-gomez, good job making revisions. Few things!
Did you email Lindsey, our graphic designer, about your background image??
If not, PLEASE EMAIL HER and have her make a new background image.
Headline:
What you have is good but let’s make it GREAT!! Please use this below – fill in the location:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
Your summary is on the right path but it still talks WAY too much about YOU and not enough about THEM.
Look at this profile of a realtor in the program:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/
That is what I want yours to look like.
Please put paragraphs between your points. The words are too squished together.
You also need your contact information at the end when you tell them to contact you. Or even just tell them to message you on LinkedIn.
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