Susan Patterson – LinkedIn Profile Review

[Susan Patterson]

Finally! … I finished my LinkedIn Profile.

Please Review and your comments are appreciated.

http://www.linkedin.com/in/patterSOLD

Susan

 

 

[n d]

Hi @susan-patterson!! Nice job taking action on your profile! Few things:

I’d like you to have a centered photo in color. The black and white seem impersonal but I love that you have a white background to your image.

You need a BETTER background photo. One of an actual house so people are intrigued to click stay on your profile. We have a graphic designer who can create one for you with lots of stock images!!

Can you please email Lindsey and tell her a little about your field of business?? Lindsey@coredm.com and let her help you make some changes?

Headline:

Good direction with the headline but there are too many “i” – how about this:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

Summary:
I really like that you started your summary asking a pain point question! How about coming up with 3 short and sweet POWERFUL pain point questions.

Also, your paragraphs are a bit chunky. You can copy these outlines if you’d like. These are the profiles of other realtors in the program:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

You want to provide information that is:

Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you. It’s nice to educate them but not throughout the entire profile.

Call To Action:

You need one!

“If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂

[Susan Patterson]

Hi Nadeen,

Updated Link …

https://www.linkedin.com/in/pattersold/

[n d]

Hi @susan-patterson! This looks fantastic!! Great work

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