Rewrote Narrative about in LINKEDIN

[C Pinto-G]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/carmina-pinto-gelberg-65824a21/

I took the feedback and rewrote the narrative.  Focused only on the types of sellers I want, and left out all the rest.  Now I’ll look for a picture/banner.

[n d]

Hi @carmina-pinto-gelberg, thank you for sending that over.

Your profile photo is good. Just send that photo to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and ask her to add a white background for you.

She will also be able to create a banner image for you as well.

Please email her at Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

Your headline still needs to be changed. Try using what I wrote down below for you:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Virginia☆☞ Message Me!

 

About Section:

What you have written is GOOD but your paragraphs are way too chunky making it difficult to read.

Please copy the example down below:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

 

Please implement the changes required above and then you will be good to move forward!

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