Revised my Profile…Please Critique

[Mindy Yount]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/mindyyount/

 

Thank you for your time!

 

[n d]

Hi @mindy-yount! Excellent job implementing my feedback 🙂

My only bit of feedback is on this part below:

Selling a luxury or lakefront property and want top dollar while enduring the least amount of hassle and stress?

Or

Looking to purchase a luxury, lakefront or secondary get-a-way home in our area and desire the confidence that you are making a solid investment?

OR BOTH!

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I feel like those are way too many options and you want to get RIGHT to the point. Have one sentence giving them 3 options or ask 3 questions and then keep going with the rest of your summary. Just imagine them wanting to get right to the juicy stuff in your summary (which you have).

Hope this helps – you’re good to move on!

[Author]

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