Revised Infomercial script

[Joy Denton]

Do you want a trustworthy, experienced advisor to guide you through your real estate transaction so that you can spend your valuable time how it matters most to you?  Do you want to maximize the value of your home when selling? Do you want an expert negotiator to get you the best price and terms when you are purchasing a property?

If you answered “yes” to these questions, you have come to the right place.

Hi, I’m Joy Denton and I’m a Real Estate Advisor with Sotheby’s Int. Realty helping clients accomplish their real estate goals.

After 23 years with Sotheby’s International Realty, I can deliver these results for you. My in depth knowledge of the business coupled with the power of the Sotheby’s brand, provides a smooth and sophisticated approach. You will benefit from my history of achieving record breaking sales and my standing in the top 1% of Sotheby’s Int. Realty agents companywide. If you are looking for a property to purchase, I will save you time and money by only viewing properties that best suit your requirements. If you are selling, my professional advice on pricing & staging will set you apart from the competition — without you having to lift a finger. I will expertly manage the marketing, negotiations, contingencies, complicated paperwork, and all details from beginning to end.

I will deliver white glove, boutique-type service allowing you to relax and enjoy your life.

If you want your next deal to be stress-free, please call me today to discuss working together – 310-266-9877. . Thank you.

 

@negeen-dargahi

@halle-eavelyn

@kent-littlejohn

[n d]

Looks great, @joy-denton!!

Here are your next steps:

Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

 

[Joy Denton]

Hi, here is a link to my infomercial video.

Please review and let me know your thoughts.

https://share.icloud.com/photos/0YrcgyPKXefjoIgZcpReZepnA

Best,

Joy

@negeen-dargahi

[n d]

Hi @joy-denton, you look great but i’m having a hard time hearing your audio.

Do you have a phone that has a good camera you could use instead and during the day time??

I want to make sure that you are filming in front of a window or where there is good lighting so the video doesn’t come off grainy.

When you play the video, how does the audio sound for you?

 

[Joy Denton]

Hi Negeen,

I think I improved the audio and also the appearance of the video.

Let me know what you think now.

Best,

Joy

@negeen-dargahi

[n d]

Hi @joy-denton, does it automatically update with the link you sent?

 

[Joy Denton]

I had my marketing team edit the video

Please advise.

thank you.
@negeen-dargahi

https://we.tl/t-1nAIZvXT8M

[n d]

Hi @joy-denton! This looks great 🙂

In the future, be sure to film during day time when it’s brighter outside, and if you can film in front of a window and not with it behind you, that will really help prevent the graininess of the video.

Overall, great work taking action and you’re good to use the video and move forward!!

 

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