revised hero story

[Monica Severson]

Hello, I already sent this on Saturday and dont see the post anywhere, Can I please get feedback on my revised copy of the Hero story? see attached. I would like feedback before sending out to others. I need to ensure this is what you are looking for. @anthony-simonie @negeen-dargahi @kent-littlejohn

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[n d]

Hi @monica-severson, while we don’t provide feedback on the hero story, you are on the right path! Please refer to Anthony Simonie’s hero story by the way he begins his telling of his childhood and then linking it back to why the audience should care. When you share your story with your peers, their feedback will help you finalize your hero story! Keep that in mind. Nice work!

 

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