Review Revised profile Angie

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- May 3, 2018 at 3:57 pm #10208
  Angie Frattalone
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  @angela.frattalone@gmail.com
  Please review my profile revised! www.linkedin.com/in/angela-frattalone-78472525
  
  Thank you,
  
  Angela Frattalone
- May 3, 2018 at 4:49 pm #10231
  n d
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  @negeen@coredm.com
  Hi @angela-frattalone! NICE work on your profile – I really like your updated profile photo as well.
  
  Few things:
  
  Your summary has good content but it’s very chunky. By this I mean, there are big paragraphs and zero spaces. Please press ‘enter’ after an important sentence so there is space after it. Also, if you’re going to add a website URL in your summary, add it to the end because it interrupts the flow.
  
  Here is a profile for reference —> https://www.linkedin.com/in/sasannikookar/
  
  Great call to action! Please tag me in your revision.
- May 10, 2018 at 1:10 pm #10981
  Angie Frattalone
  Participant
  @angela.frattalone@gmail.com
  Please review my profile revised! www.linkedin.com/in/angela-frattalone-78472525
  
  Thank you,
  
  Angela Frattalone
  - May 10, 2018 at 2:48 pm #11006
    n d
    Keymaster
    
    @negeen@coredm.com
    @angela-frattalone YES! Great work, I’m LOVING your content! One last thing, I recommend you have a background photo related to your business if you can 🙂 other than that, you are good to move on!
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