Review Profile – Jane Cranston

[Jane Cranston]

Hello,

Here is the url to my LinkedIn profile – https://www.linkedin.com/in/janecranston/

I don’t like how my headline wraps but I can’t seem to figure out how to get it to split correctly – Help!

Thank you,

Jane

 

[n d]

Hi @jane-cranston! A really nice job with your profile! Great photo; very professional!

Headline:

Try out this template —> and keep in mind it has a 120 character limit. Also, are you location independent?

Want _______ WITHOUT _______?☆EXPERT_____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

Your profile would benefit if you essentially COPY Kent Littlejohn’s LI profile outline because you have REALLY great content, it’s just not organized and it doesn’t immediately grab my attention.

Kent’s profile —-> https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call to action could be a touch better. How about…
If you’re wanting __________, then message or call me TODAY at _______to see if  we’re a good fit!
Overall, great job. Just needs a bit of organization. Tag me when you’ve completed your revision and I’ll take a look 🙂

• This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by n d.

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