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Hi @terri-danielson! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:
GREAT profile photo! Could you email that photo to our graphic designer, Lindsey, please? Ask her to add a white background for you. This will really help the photo pop and stand out a bit more from the dark background.
You also need a background banner image behind your profile photo! Please also, in that email, tell Lindsey what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have written is “Realtor at Coldwell Banker Realty” BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
I want you to speak to your perfect client through your sales letter (not in 3rd person).
You have good content but the point of the About section is to lead them through your sales letter of “here’s how I can help YOU”.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized!
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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