Review of Infomercial

[Kristen Mehr]

Hi there @negeen-dargahi @halle-eavelyn …was not sure who to tag but here is what I have would love feedback as soon as you get a chance. Thanks! (It is a minute 8 seconds but I do not know what else to take out….)

Does the thought of selling your home overwhelm you or seem like a real hassle…or you just don’t know where to start?

Nervous that you won’t choose an agent that will get you the most money in the sale?

If your answer is YES to these questions, I know I can be of assistance!

Hi, I’m Kristen Mehr and I head up the Truly Fine Homes Team at Keller Williams here in Atlanta GA.

When you work with me you gain a trusted advocate who has perfected the art of negotiating and marketing residential properties.

What does that mean for you? Bottomline: You will net the most amount of money in the least amount of time, stress free. You see, I don’t just list houses I get them SOLD.

Yes, you heard that right! I have never listed a property that didn’t receive a viable offer!

I have a proven 8-point strategy for selling homes. It works for every price point…And, it allows my clients to have a stress-free transaction.

If you’re ready to see a SOLD sign in your yard and a bunch of extra money in your bank account then call me TODAY at 404.991.0055 or message me here on LI to see if we’re a good fit!

Cheers

[Halle Eavelyn]

I actually like this as-is, but suggest you alter the “I know I can be of assistance” line because it’s not strong enough and it sounds too needy.  Use something people know like “you’ve come to the right place” or say something powerful like “listen to what I can do for you” – which also sets up the concept of Benefits Marketing.

You MIGHT also consider skipping the (usually de rigeur) pain questions in favor of making this short and sweet:

 

Do you want to net the most amount of money in the least amount of time, stress free?

I don’t just list houses I get them SOLD.

Yes, you heard that right! I have never listed a property that didn’t receive a viable offer!

Hi, I’m Kristen Mehr and I head up the Truly Fine Homes Team at Keller Williams here in Atlanta GA.

When you work with me you gain a trusted advocate who has perfected the art of negotiating and marketing residential properties.

I have a proven 8-point strategy for selling homes. It works for every price point…And, it allows my clients to have a stress-free transaction.

If you’re ready to see a SOLD sign in your yard and a bunch of extra money in your bank account then call me TODAY at 404.991.0055 or message me here on LI to see if we’re a good fit!

 

Both work!  Great job, @kristen-mehr!!

 

[Kristen Mehr]

Halle, @halle-eavelyn

Thank you so much for the feedback. It is perfect.

I also wanted to let you know that I love you being on this earth. If for no other reason, I am thrilled to be in this program just to be connected with you. You make the world a better place, you make MY world a better place. I so super excited to meet you in October in person and give you a big hug.

Keep rockin’ it!

PS: Couldn’t be on accountability call but reached out to 170 contacts on LinkedIn and will be doing 150 a week for the first month. (I am blessed to have an assistant and an intern who are embracing the 4 question process. So I am only reaching out to the Connects I already have and endorsing and commenting on posts. Need to narrow my focus and that will come with time. I think I might start advertising a Corporate Program which will possibly be more intriguing for some LI folks…slow and steady, one bite at a time.)

K

[Halle Eavelyn]

Thank you, @kristen-mehr – I am blushing!!  BIG HUG coming back at you!!

Great job on accountability!! WHAT do you want to be held accountable for this week??

[Kristen Mehr]

150 contacts and 5 actual calls with people…not sure if that is possible however it is in my head and thus it was ever so!
When will your recording be up that you did with Networking for Realtors etc…I totally didn’t get any notice and didn’t know where to look to see when it was….Might be fun to have a Calendar on your site with scheduled calls and special events…just a thought….
Halle, I am a hard woman to impress and you got me…a coach can never be coached…and you are the first one I actually think would work….We would be friends if we lived near each other…
Anyways. Enough…On to figuring out how to record my infomercials.

[n d]

Hi @kristen-mehr, tagging in @halle-eavelyn so she sees your response.

I noticed you were wondering how to film your infomercial…

Halle has a very informative video on the best ways to film your infomercial.

The video is called: “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

Please let me know if you have further questions!

 

[Halle Eavelyn]

@kristen-mehr, thanks again for the kudos.  I’ve got your accountability – remember, THOUGHTS ARE THINGS – so if you say it’s so, it IS!!!  YES!!!!

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