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[Laura Gordon]

It has been a journey that has been both rewarding and gratifying.

I smashed my goals and dreams and produced $12M in sales in one month!

Does it take work? Yes!

Is it hard work? No!

Is It duplicatable? Absolutely!

Can you build a business doing this? Yes, if you are willing to help other people become successful.

So, who am I?

I am a son of a NY policy man and grew up in the Bronx.

I have 3 brothers and 2 sisters. I am one of the oldest siblings in our family.
Our family did not have much money and there is one thing that I never want to see on my dinner plate for as long as I live, lima beans. Needless to say my mother bought food in bulk and lima beans were always plentiful.

My dad was loyal, hard-working, and committed to doing what was right. He inspired me growing up and I stand for those same principles today.

I went to West Point, and out of college I secured a job at a local junior high school teaching math and coaching football and lacrosse. After 1 year of doing that, I decided to leave teaching and coaching and I entered the corporate world working for a candy and tobacco company.

My biggest achievement in the corporate environment was when I rose to VP within 1 year and advanced the company from $20 million a year to $100 million a year within 3 years.

But, something was missing. I was unhappy going to work everyday for someone else. They controlled my day and my income. No matter how many hours I put in every day, every week, every month, my paycheck was still the same and empty promises to boot.

Then I found the insurance industry. I started in the health industry and worked my way through every insurance niche there is and learn every pitfall and lesson there is to learn in the insurance industry.

I eventually landed feet first in the final expense niche with one insurance carrier where I earned National Marketing Director numerous years in a row, went on yearly company trips, and I smashed my goals and dreams and produced $12M in sales in one month.

Now, I own a very successful independent family run agency and enjoy helping new and existing agents build their dreams. I truly enjoy watching others build their own financial freedom business. This business isn’t complicated but it does take persistency and the tenacity of never giving up.

I know what it takes to be successful! Our agency infrastructure is built so YOU can build your business as big as you can dream it. We will help you every step of the way.

Are you ready?

Call us today at 888-288-8512 or email me at tom@goldenheritageinsurance.com.

[n d]

HI @laura-gordon! This is really good but I want you to speak to the client about how you can help them and less about your qualifications. Does that make sense? Check out how Kent speaks directly to his perfect client all while explaining what he does:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

You have the content, it just needs to emphasise on “you” and less on “I”.

GOOD call to action!! 🙂

 

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