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Nageen-
Please review and help with my Headline and Summary.
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Hi @angela-frattalone! Nice job taking action!
Few things…
– Nice profile photo! Do you have a photo that is better quality? If not, no worries! I want you to email it to our graphic designer and ask her to add in a white background for you to make it professional ALSO have her create a better cover photo for you —> Lindsey@coredm.com
Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:(examples below) **** i know you’re not a realtor but please just get ideas, or you can even look at Kent Littlejohn’s LI profile!!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/I still don’t really know what you do and I need you to make it clear to your audience EXACTLY what you do and WHO you help and HOW. This is all in the profile accelerator.
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 2-3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
- THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that. <—3-6 sentences
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
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Nageen,
Could you give e some samples of people that are not realtors, insurance or investment people.
(Its easy to explain what a realtor can do for you, because everyone is familiar with Real estate)
that are in the company and have done their headline and summary. My 1st coaching call with Halle she mentioned she had worked with Network marketers, MLM’s, new business done online, or working with the internet for new business owners.
I like how y photo is, and the cover photo. At first you said it was a great photo then you told me to get another one. I don’t understand that line?
Are their any templates, that could guide us? I get the profile accelerator is the answer but I filled that out and submitted it so I can’t see what I wrote?
Please help, 1st week of confusion!
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Happy to provide you MLM examples from clients in our program —>
https://www.linkedin.com/in/debramenchel/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/anilakhetarpal/
You do have a good profile photo but it was a bit grainy, I was simply suggesting that as an option.
The outline I provided you is the best outline you could follow as far as filling out your LinkedIn profile. Let me know if I can help further, hope you’re not too confused! Here if you need assistance 🙂
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