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Hi @wanda-desimone! Nice job submitting your profile for the review! Right now, i’m not seeing a profile photo or banner image. Please make sure to add those.
Headline: what you currently have written is “Realtor at Terrie O’Connor Realtors” BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
or you could use this:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
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About section:
This sentence is very hard to read:
I am EXCITED!DRIVEN! &FOCUSED! to meet my clients’ REQUIREMENTS.
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Remember, this is not a sales letter about you – you want it to be about them. Replace “I” with “you”. You want to lead them into WHAT you do, WHO you work with, and WHY they should work with you.
Here are some realtor profile examples that should help:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/carl-unruh-b3598329/
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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