REVIEW for 30 SEC INFOMERCIAL

[Angela McCants]

@alison-liddic

@negeen-dargahi

@halle-eavelyn

@kent-littlejohn

I would love a review & feedback, please.  Timed myself and 30 seconds is difficult!  This is a few seconds more – maybe I speak slower than most. 🙂 ?

The script is attached.  Thank you!!

Angela

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[n d]

Hi @angela-mccants!! Great work!

30 seconds is ideal but if it’s shorter than 1min30sec that is okay too!!

Take out “If SO, message me now.” from the beginning since you have it at the end.

Feel free to add another sentence if you’d like. Everything looks great!

 

[Halle Eavelyn]

Have you reshot this yet,  @angela-mccants? If not, please post your script here and tag me, ok?  otherwise, please repost!

Thanks!!
Halle

[Angela McCants]

@halle-eavelyn  Here it is.  Thanks!

Angela

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[Halle Eavelyn]

@angela-mccants, awesome!  Now… Here’s my suggested revision:

Would you like to sell your home without second guessing yourself?  What if you could sell your home with CONFIDENCE? Confidence that you’ve negotiated the best terms and price for your home.  Confidence that you have trustworthy representation!

I’m Angela McCants.

By giving you up to date market information, providing you with proven best practices and turn-key solutions from the beginning of the sales process to the end, we ensure you receive the positive results you deserve!

Message me here on LinkedIn.  Let’s chat to find out if we’d be a good fit for your great home sale.

[Angela McCants]

@halle-eavelyn

Love it. Thank you for the fine tuning!  Working on the delivery now…

Problem is – You can tell when I’m reading and when I do it from memory – I talk slower and I don’t look/sound confident. 🙁

[Halle Eavelyn]

If you’re on an iPhone OR an Android, search their stores for teleprompter apps.  You will find some on BOTH sites that cost $10 or less.  Also, look in the Transformational Business Strategy module at the bottom of your training dashboard and watch my video on Filming/Video Tips!  It will really help!  You’ve got this!!!

[Angela McCants]

@halle-eavelyn

This is it for now..Until I can improve on it.

Thanks!

Angela

[n d]

Nice work, @angela-mccants! I want you to check out Halle’s video called “video tips” in the Transformational Business Strategy module. I’d like you to refilm with your camera horizontally and with a different background. To get to the module click on ‘dashboard’ then go to ‘program module’ and then scroll to the bottom and you will see it.

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