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https://www.linkedin.com/in/pccoach/
profile accelerator worksheets attached
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Hi @linda-lindquist! So sorry about the delayed response – I did respond but it seems my comments did not save. Below are my new comments on your profile:
First off, great job taking action on your profile accelerator!
Your profile photo is nice – i’d like it to have a white background so it POPS. Please email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and ask her to add a white background for you — Lindsey@coredm.com
Banner/Background image: this is very very loud and your profile photo is covering up some sections. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, tell her about your field of work and she will create something custom and better for you!
Headline: Your headline (words under your name) is the most important piece of real estate on your profile. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
There are a lot of “I” in the beginning and the first few sentences of your sales letter are the MOST important. I challenge you to remove the “I” and replace with “you” because right now a lot of it begins with who you are and not about how you can help THEM.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized!
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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