Dashboard Forums High End Client Program LinkedIn – Profile Reviews & Questions Public Profile done! Please check

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      Gilberto Laparra
      Participant
        @gilberto@gobemax.com

        This is the profile I have done for myself and my assistant. Let me know if there should be any changes!

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/michellecanlas/

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/gilbertolaparra/

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        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          aHi, @gilberto-laparra! NICE work on these profiles, I can tell you’re going to be a rockstar in the program! Below is my feedback for each profile:

          MICHELLE PROFILE FEEDBACK:

          Great profile photo!

          You’ve got a good background BUT…if you find you want to update your background image, we have a full-time graphic designer, Lindsey, who can create one for you at any time. You would just email her at Lindsey@coredm.com

          Headline:

          I wanted to take out “no more wasted time” because it was bad grammar and revamped it.

          Want HIGHER Sales AND Ideal Clients WITHOUT Wasting More Time?★ Getting Business Owners Huge RESULTS★MSG ME 👇

          Summary:

          Your summary looks really great!! NICE work!

          GILBERTO PROFILE FEEDBACK:

          Great profile photo and background photo!!

          NICE headline! Grabbed my attention and right to the point!

          You have a typo in your first sentence. You wrote “of” instead of “or” so it would look like:

          WHAT I DO IN 20 WORDS OR LESS:

          Great profile!! Everything looks super on both! Nice job taking massive imperfeCT action 🙂

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