Profile review – (with link)

[Regina Wagner]

@kent-littlejohn

@negeen-dargahi

Hi,

My apologies…forgot the link and here it is…

https://www.linkedin.com/in/regina-wagner-a282b4203/

Regina Wagner

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Hi @regina-wagner! Wonderful – happy to provide you with feedback below:

Your profile photo is lovely! Zoom in a pinch more so we can clearly see your smiling face.

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you. This will help you page stand out more!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Real Estate Sales and Consultant”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

I like how you’re starting off talking about your qualifications but I want to remind you that this is less of a resume format and more of a sales letter. I’d love for you to start off with WHAT you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and WHY they should work with you. Try to keep the focus more on them – you can do this by using more “you” than “i” in your sales letter.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

 

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