Profile Review – Terry

[Terry Lajoie]

@negeen-dargahi  – Please review my LinkedIn profile, link is below, thank you.  Terry

https://www.linkedin.com/in/lajoiehometeam/

 

[n d]

Hi there @teresa-lajoie! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

Good profile photo! Please zoom in a bit more.

I’d like you to get a new banner background image – we actually have a full-time graphic designer who can create something custom for you! Just email her your field of work and any logos and words you want.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

I do like your headline BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about this:

Want To Fast-Track Your Real Estate Career WITHOUT Wasting Time?☆Earn A 6 FIGURE INCOME With Our Training And Mentorship☆☞MSG Me!

Terry, if the character limit hits, try to remove the symbols. 

About Section:

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Instead of diving right into your first sentence, i’d like you to introduce it like this:

What I Do In A Few Words:

I help clients like YOU fast-track your real estate career with a proven training system to help become a TOP agent.

Let me ask you…

Are you serious about your Real Estate career? Do you want to consistently earn a 6-Figure+ income? Are you TIRED of trying to figure it out on your own and want to start your career? If you’ve answered YES to these questions, I have everything you need to get this and MORE!

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Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized!

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions 🙂

 

[Terry Lajoie]

@negeen-dargahi, I’ve updated the profile, please let me know your thoughts!  🙂

https://www.linkedin.com/in/lajoiehometeam/

 

[n d]

Hey there @teresa-lajoie! Nice job taking action – did you email Lindsey about your banner/background image??

SUPER headline! This looks so much better and it is very eye-catching 😉

Your about section is WOW. Fantastic job implementing my feedback and taking immediate action – it all looks so concise and right to the point.

Proud of you!!

 

[Terry Lajoie]

@negeen-dargahi Thank you Negeen!

 

Yes I emailed Lindsey this morning, and sent her several versions of my logo. I wasn’t sure what she was going to need so I gave her several options. 🙂

 

Thank you.

 

[n d]

Amazing, great work @teresa-lajoie 🙂

[Terry Lajoie]

@negeen-dargahi, Thank you. 🙂

 

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