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Hi @ann-curley! Nice job taking that massive imperfect action on your profile! Few things:
Great profile photo!
I don’t like your background photo very much. It doesn’t depict what your field of business is or what you do.
I’d like you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better and more professional.
Headline:
This needs some work. How about filling out this template (you can copy and paste):
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!
You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
You also need a better call to action. How about this:
If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision 🙂
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