PROFILE REVIEW PLEASE

[Bob Moore]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/bobmoorerealestate/

 

thank you

[candy Bowman]

Wow, high energy….What backs up your claims?  Other than that I love !

[n d]

Hey there @robert-bob-moore! Great job submitting your profile for the review! Below are my comments:

A very nice profile photo! Very professional and inviting 🙂

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s way too loud and doesn’t showcase anything eye-catching. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!

Here is her email: Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Excited to help you with your Real Estate dream” its not bad but we really want to make it POP! How about this instead:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

^ make sure to fill in the blank and the location.

About Section:

I love the energy you have in your profile but its very loud and I want you to be able to lead your readers through your sales letter — let’s add some more content that tells your perfect client WHO you work with, HOW you help them, and WHY they should work with you.

Here are a few profile examples:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

http://www.linkedin.com/in/alissa-mack

https://www.linkedin.com/in/marshallembry/

Here is Kent Littlejohn’s that you can use as an outline:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!

[Bob Moore]

in my headline  the 3 buttons are

<section id=”ember123″ class=”artdeco-card ember-view pv-open-to-carousel-card
pv-open-to-carousel-card–enrolled pv-open-to-carousel-card–single”>
<div class=”display-flex justify-space-between pl3
pr1″>OPEN   ADD SECTION   MORE

other profiles I’ve seen are

MESSAGE    MORE

</section>

How do I change that??

[n d]

Hey there @robert-bob-moore! To make edits to your headline:

• go to your profile
• click on the pen to the right side
• you will see a section that says “headline” and from there, you can copy and paste what I have written. You can tweak the words in there as well.

Does that answer your question?

[Bob Moore]

NO

I’m trying to Change the 3 buttons that say

<section id=”ember332″ class=”pe-hub-section ember-view mr2″>OPEN   ADD SECTION   MORE</section><section></section><section>they are for folks that use LINKEDIN foe employment</section><section></section><section>other folks buttons say MESSAGE    FOLLOW     MORE</section><section></section><section></section>

[n d]

Hi @robert-bob-moore, you are unable to change what that button says. Sorry about that! LinkedIn will not allow you to change that. That button is for your own eyes when you are making changes to your LinkedIn page.

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