Dashboard Forums High End Client Program LinkedIn – Profile Reviews & Questions Profile Review on LinkedIn… ndb

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      Nicholas Brown
      Participant
        @opulencetutoringservice@gmail.com

        Good Evening Negeen

        I tried your advice… can you see if I am moving in the right direction with the new information I just added please.

        @negeen-dargahi

        @kent-littlejohn

        http://linkedin.com/in/nicholas-brown-a0b1ab172

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        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @nicholas-brown! This looks so much better!! Few things:

          Have you found a new and professional profile photo? This is very necessary!!

          Did you email Lindsey@coredm.com about your background photo?? This is ALSO necessary!

          Headline looks great!!

          Summary:

          Take out the “hiring a tutor” after every pain point question. Just ask 3 short and sweet pain point questions.

          I revised the bottom half of your profile (just fill in the blanks):

          Want an example?

          I helped a client ____________ in ______ WEEKS to _________.

          Yes. You read that right!

          When you work with me, you can rest assured knowing I go at your student’s pace and make sure they not only understand what they’re learning… but retaining the information.

          I know what you are thinking…

          Well, Nicholas, I don’t know if my child has the skill set for college…

          Will you still give your 100% effort and work with my child?

          How about this answer!!!

          ABSOLUTELY. I make sure ALL students are provided with full attention to their needs.

          If you’re READY for _________  message me here on LinkedIn TODAY to see if your student is a good fit.

          SUPER SUPER JOB 🙂

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