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Hey @stephen-desena, wonderful to have you in the program! Below are my comments for revision:
Your profile photo is lovely but would personally like to see the same photo but at eye level. The camera is way too high up and it looks like we are looking down on you. Try to find a photo with the camera at eye level. If you prefer to keep this photo, send it to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and have her add a white background for you so the photo looks more professional.
Here is her email -> Lindsey@coredm.com
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you. You can also send any logos you want added.
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have written is on the right path BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
Go back through the lesson for this section because we really want to make it less resume format and more of a sales letter leading your perfect client through your services.
You want to share WHAT you do, WHO you work with, and WHY they should work with you.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Here’s a good way to get some inspiration:
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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