profile review

[Leah Volkov]

Hi @negeen-dargahi!

I was hoping you could review my profile for me.  Thanks so much!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/leahvolkov/

 

 

[n d]

Hey @leah-volkov! Of course 🙂

Typo in your headline “Nor sure where to even start?”

You can break up this paragraph to elongate your message to look like this:

I can manage the probate listing process from start to finish or simply work alongside you as an advocate and advisor.

You will have a team of experts that will assist with time-consuming tasks such as clearing and cleaning out the home, selling unwanted items, and completing minor repairs.

What’s better is that I work in tandem with your attorney to make sure nothing gets overlooked on the legal side, too!

You need a stronger call to action:

If you’re ready for FULL support with ______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

 

[Leah Volkov]

@negeen-dargahi

Thanks so much!  Here it is with the recommended changes.  Anything else?

https://www.linkedin.com/in/leahvolkov/

[n d]

Hi @leah-volkov, have the call to action after your testimonials:

If you’re ready for FULL support with the probate process, then give me a call TODAY at 503-551-7392 or message me here on LinkIn to see if we’re a good fit!

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Everything else looks fantastic!!

 

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