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Hi @michelle-kahl, wonderful job taking action on your profile! I’m happy to review it and provide my comments below:
Beautiful profile photo! Let’s make it pop with a white background instead – please email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and she will do that for you.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
I love what you have started with but there are way too many ********** symbols. How about filling out this template (feel free to copy and paste once you’re done and put it in the headline slot):
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Instead of starting out by saying “I care about you and I pay attention to detail!” i’d like you to potentially ask 3 short and sweet pain point questions that your perfect client would resonate with. Then, continue to lead them through your sales letter on WHAT you do, WHO you work with, and HOW you help your clients.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action needed at the end:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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WHAT I DO IN 14 WORDS OR LESS…
“I energetically list, market and Sell your home.”
What are your biggest concerns about Selling now?
What possible Roadblocks could prevent you from getting Top Dollar for your home?
What are you looking for in an agent?I care about You and I pay attention to the details involved in Your transaction!
As a Realtor, I know buying or selling your home is about more than real estate; it’s about your life and your dreams. Dedicated to building life-long client relationships backed by unmatched enthusiasm, I will give you the best advice and support possible while representing you in what could be one of the biggest transactions of your lifetime. I am committed to building a long-lasting relationship with you based on trust and consideration so you are comfortable before, during, and after you close on your home. I can help First time buyers AND move up buyers smoothly through the real estate process. I can help those who need to list and sell their home and move local or out of town.
Communication and honesty are important and among my top priorities when helping you navigate your real estate journey. Known by clients and colleagues alike for my determination, perseverance, and integrity, I can guide you through the process of making one of your greatest transactions as stress-free as possible. A passionate and market-savvy professional, my goal is to take a seemingly complicated process and make it not only understandable, but profitable for you as well.
A member of both the Woman’s Council of Realtors and the Million Dollar Real Estate Association, I am well-rounded in various aspects of the real estate industry, and believe in being as active in my field as possible. I promise to use my vast amount of real estate experience to ensure you have a satisfying transaction. My philosophy is plain and simple: My clients come first. Your happiness is my driving force and I promise you can always count on me to give you everything you need to make the best decision for your real estate needs.
If you’re ready for Action then give me a call TODAY at 410.790.8402 or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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Hey @michelle-kahl, try to remove some capitalizations on words that don’t need to be capitalized like “Sell” and “You” in the middle of sentences.
I love what you have written! Put this in your actual LinkedIn profile and if some of the bigger paragraphs look chunky, break them up so it’s easier to read.
Did you get your profile photo and banner image fixed with Lindsey’s help?
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Hi Negeen.
I have emailed Lindsey from my CB email twice but have had no response.
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Hm, would you mind forwarding me that email, please?? I’ll make sure it’s taken care of. Typically, it takes her 72 hours to get back to clients, so that could be the reason.
Here is my email: negeen@coredm.com
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