Profile review

[Cassie Barr]

Please review my profile! I still need to add background picture.

 

Cassandra Barr | LinkedIn

 

[n d]

HI @cassie-barr, welcome to the program! I’d be happy to review your profile for you – my comments are below:

Your profile photo is lovely! I would like for you to add a white background to it which you can have Lindsey, our graphic designer, add that for you. In the future, if you want to upload a picture to your LI, i’d love for you to face the camera. If your head is tilting with minimal eye contact, it’s hard to be direct with the photo. But what you have is good for now 🙂

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Licensed Real Estate Agent at eXp Realty of California, Inc”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

I like how you’re starting off your sales letter by asking a pain point question but the remainder of your message is too heavily focused on you and less on your perfect client. Remember that this is a sales letter telling your clients WHAT you do, WHO you work with, and HOW you help.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE good content, it just needs to be better organized with more information added.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

*** please make sure you are connecting with at least 20 people on LinkedIn a day, if possible. Connect with anyone and everyone!

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