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https://www.linkedin.com/in/scott-kehoe-624791ab/
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Hi there, @scott-kehoe! Awesome job posting in the support forum – I’d be happy to review your profile.
Love you background photo and profile photo!
Your headline needs a few more words to make it actionable:
What you have written is “Do you want to maximize the value of your business for high profit, without stress?” but let’s add more:
“Do you want to maximize the value of your business for high profit, without stress? Message Me!”
About Section:
Your first 2 sentences are okay. I’d personally love it if you added 3 short and sweet pain point questions:
Do you NEED _______?
Are you wanting ________?
Ready for ______ but don’t know where to begin?
If you’re asking these questions, I know exactly how to help.
I help clients like you with _______________.
Essentially…
[talk about how you help your clients and what you do for them]
^ fill in the blanks and this will help you with making your points.
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Scott, if you can remove that HUGE chunky paragraph at the end of your About section, please do so!
Otherwise, once you make these changes you can move forward in the program 🙂
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