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Hey @mark-antonowsky, thank you for submitting your profile for a review! Below are my comments:
Your profile photo is nice but I feel you should upload the professional photo you have uploaded here on HECP.
I don’t love the background banner image behind your profile photo. It doesn’t showcase what you do and this is an important piece on your profile.
Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is and she will create something custom for you! If you have a logo or phone number added, she can add that too.
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have written is a bit hard to read… BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Remove the hashtags if possible.
Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
I like how you’re starting off your sales letter talking about how you help your clients – that’s great!
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile outline:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action (you need a stronger one):
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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