Profile Review

[Amanda Peterson]

 

**I am working on putting together more BEFORE/AFTER pic collages of staging and updating projects I’ve done for clients to post in my featured & experience sections.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/amanda-peterson-your-homegirl-93771a4/

[n d]

Hi @amanda-peterson! Thank you for submitting your profile for the review! You have a very unique stance – helping someone who is out of a relationship and assisting them with finding a home. I love that! You can really do a lot in this unique niche!

Profile Photo: Could you zoom out a bit on your profile photo? I love this picture but it’s just 20% too zoomed in. Also, please send it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her add a white background for you.

Background Banner image: what you currently have does not display what your field of work focuses on – I’d love for you to send a snippet of what you do, to Lindsey, and she can create a custom banner image for you!

Please email her at Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

Newly or Nearly Single? Are you thinking about selling your home but are too overwhelmed to get started? I can save you thousands & take away the stress of moving out so you can focus on moving on!

I love what you have written – try to plug it into this little template so your message really pops (visually)!

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

About:

I really love your content – but the first sentence and paragraph and too focused on a breakup and less on you helping with real estate needs. When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

 

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