Profile review

[Carol Lunde]

Here is. my LinkedIn profile, please let me know what I can do to make it better:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/carollunde/

 

[n d]

Hi there, @carol-lunde! It’s great to have you here in the program with us – below are my comments and suggestions:

Your profile photo is lovely but the background is a bit distracting. Could you please email the photo to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and please have her center the photo and add a white background for you? This will help it be more professional-looking.

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Residential Realtor at Keller Williams Greater Des Moines Licensed in the state of Iowa, Another Home Sells”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

I like how you’re starting off your sales letter talking about pain point questions! I would just stick to 3 powerful ones at the beginning of your sales letter (about section).

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

You want to make it less about you and more about them. WHO do you work with, HOW do you help your clients, WHY should they work with you?

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/renita-baldwin-realtor%C2%AE-at-quality-choice-solutions-llc-314695197/

Call to action at end could be stronger:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
 

[Carol Lunde]

@negeen-dargahi

@kent-littlejohn

Here is my draft of my Hero Story, what can I change?

https://www.linkedin.com/post/edit/6922999369377988608/

[n d]

Hi @carol-lunde, can you please post this in the Hero Story forum topic? You posted this as a reply in the LinkedIn Profile questions and reviews forum topic 🙂

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