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@halle-eavelyn @kent-littlejohn @negeen-dargahi
Please review my linkedin Profile
https://www.linkedin.com/in/britney-butlerresidentialsellerspecialist/
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Hi @britney-butler, awesome job taking action on your profile! Below are my comments for revision:
Great profile photo but I don’t like the dark gray background – looks outdated. If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to add a white background for you.
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting and it’s a little bland. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!!
About Section:
“expert that will cause your home to sell” — I don’t love using the word “cause”. Instead, say “EXPERT who will get your home SOLD”
Call to action (you need one at the very end after your testimonials) !!
f you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂
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Everything else looks great!
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Please see revisions. @negeen-dargahi
https://www.linkedin.com/in/britney-butlerresidentialsellerspecialist/
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This looks fantastic – great work @britney-butler!!! 🙂
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