profile help

[Larry DeBerry]

I need some help with my profile

Here is my Link

https://www.linkedin.com/in/larry-deberry-7a80a0173/

Thanks

[n d]

Hi @larry-deberry! I’m happy to provide you with feedback on your profile:

Your profile photo is lovely but it’s very blurry. Do you have a photo of higher quality you could upload?

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you. What you currently have is OK – it could be better and closely related to your field of work.

Here is our graphic designer’s email:

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Associate Broker Coldwell Banker Realty”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

I like how you’re starting off your sales letter talking about what you do but you also want to make it less resume and more of a sales letter!

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should help you remove those bullet points at the end and focus on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______, call me TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

 

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