6 years, 5 months ago-
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Please give me feedback on my profile
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Hi @sharon-tuckman! A really nice job on your profile! Your formatting and content really shine… great work on keeping
it about your clients! Now, a few things to revise:
Headline (words under your name):
I love what you’ve started but I wanted to make it a bit more specific to your clients. How about this —->Need To SELL An Inherited Property Quickly For The Best Price? ☆ EXPERT Estate Sale Realtor In Chicago Area ☆☞ MSG Me!
^ please copy and paste in your ‘headline’ slot
Summary:
When you say “I can help.” Change to —-> “If this sounds like you… don’t worry. I know EXACTLY how to help you.”
Instead of “my pledge for sellers” Change to —-> WHAT I DO FOR MY CLIENTS:
You also copy and pasted ^ that section TWICE on your profile, please take the 2nd repeating paragraph out. Proofread!
I really want you to communicate with your readers. Why should they work with you? Do you have any stats to provide??
Lastly, your call to action needs to change to this —–>
If you’re wanting __________ then give me a call TODAY at ______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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