Prelimnary Review and Help

[Laverne Denyer]

Please check out what I have so far done with my Preliminary Profile

LESSON 2 – Update Your LinkedIn Profile

And I would like help with the Summary. Somehow my brain isn’t clicking on it.

Thanks.

Laverne

[n d]

Hey @laverne-denyer – actually, you can just click this as complete in Lesson 2 because you already put the information on LinkedIn and I have been providing you feedback. Essentially, the lesson accelerator was to prepare you for putting everything in your LinkedIn profile, which you have done.

Please look at the feedback I provided. In the lesson, you can check mark that you accomplished the profile accelerator.

[Laverne Denyer]

I did check it. @negeen-dargahi
https://www.linkedin.com/in/laverne-e-denyer-52458417/

• This reply was modified 4 years, 5 months ago by Laverne Denyer.

[n d]

Hi @laverne-denyer – good work revising! Are you still waiting for Lindsey on the background image??

Your headline needs to change – if you could think back on your Perfect Client and their pain points, I’d like you to fill out the template below and copy and paste it in your headline slot please:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

About:

Remove this from the beginning of your About section:
“How well do you know who you are and how to live your life’s goals peace and joy? That is the question for you to ask yourself. Can you answer that question fully and honestly? Is there more you want to know? When you are READY for intuitive guidance, PM me to see if we’re a good fit!”

The sentence below was revised because the question was grammatically incorrect:

Are you lonely and looking for a healthy relationship or simply need to fix a toxic relationship?

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Everything else looks GREAT!!!! It made me want to seek your advice immediately 😉 good work, Laverne!

 

[Laverne Denyer]

Yes I am still waiting for the background image. Thanks.

[Laverne Denyer]

I received and posted the background image. @negeen-dargahi

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[n d]

Hi @laverne-denyer – the slogan at the bottom right is very difficult to read.

Can you either have Lindsey remove that or choose a non-cursive font??

[Laverne Denyer]

I sent her an email with your comment.

[Laverne Denyer]

This is the revised banner

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[n d]

Looks much better, @laverne-denyer!

 

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