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Hi @jennifer-durrett, so sorry about that! Looks like I must have missed this. Below are my comments:
Your profile photo is lovely! I think it would stand out more with a brighter background color. Could you email that photo to our graphic designer and have her add a white background for you, please?
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. You could be doing a lot more with this space. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you! If you want to send your logos over, she can also add that in for you.
Headline (words under name):
Looks SUPER! Just replace the “&” symbol with “and” written out.
About Section:
This also looks really good – it looks a bit short but if you make some of the sentences their own sections, it could elongate your sales letter.
I’d love for you to add a section stating WHO you work with (look at Kent’s profile to see what i mean).
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile (format-wise):
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Everything else looks great!
Call to action needs to be stronger at the end:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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