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Hi @steve-lifgren! Welcome to the program and nice work taking action on your profile! Below are my comments:
Nice profile photo! If you do have one of you smiling, that would be more inviting but not mandatory! Zoom in a little bit more on your face.
You need a background image (the blue banner). I’d like you to email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!
Headline:
LOVE it!! Good work!
About section:
VERY IMPORTANT* please focus only on buyers or sellers. NOT both (for your sales letter). We find that profiles for realtors are more powerful when they have a honed in focus. Of course, in your actual profile, you can mention you do both. But for your sales letter, it’s important to pick one that you enjoy the most.
You also need a lot more content.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile. We teach this outline in the program so it is okay if you do that. Just add your own information to the outline.
Look how they detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Please go back through the lesson – you need a lot more content.
You need to tell them:
what you do, how you help them, who you work with, why they should work with you
CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:
If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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Hi @negeen-dargahi. Thank you for the feedback and kick 🙂
The profile has been updated except for the photo and background image. Lindsey has been contacted about the background image and will get a more inviting photo up there. I agree with you. This was from my previous life in the corporate world.
Would love v2 on the feedback!
Thanks
Steve
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YES LOVE it @steve-lifgren!! SUPER proud of you.
Please put quotes around this:
I’m an opinionated buyer. Steve took the time to get to know me and what was important to me. He found me the perfect house and took the stress out of the entire process.
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You’re good to move forward 🙂
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