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      Jaime Gomez
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        @realjaime@hotmail.com

        http://app.hecp.com/members/jaime-gomez/profile/

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        Anonymous
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          Hi @jaime-gomez! Nice job taking action with your LinkedIn profile. Next time please put the info on your actual profile and then share your LinkedIn URL here for me or Negeen to review. We need to see it all together to be able to give a full review.

          Have you gone through the profile accelerator yet? I’m asking because currently, your profile reads more like a resume than a sales letter. You want your profile to be all about the prospect and how you can help THEM.

          Headline (words under your name) —You will need one, and since you did not share the link to your profile I cannot comment on what you currently have as your headline.

          To keep your headline simple but POWERFUL, fill this out and add it to that location:

          Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞MSG Me!

          Summary:

          Here are a couple of excellent LinkedIn profile examples:

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

          Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II” videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

          There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!

          Refer to the examples and copy the format and outline they have!

          Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

          THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.

          2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

          Who you like to work with

          Call to action:

          You want to position yourself as the ALPHA who doesn’t just work with anyone.

          Use this format:

          If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit to work together.

           

          TAG me in your revision!!

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