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    • October 18, 2022 at 7:27 pm #49939

      Jay Galea
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        @jay.galea@exitlubbock.com

        Hello! Please review my linked in profile!  @negeen-dargahi

        http://www.linkedin.com/in/jay-galea-0b952868

         

        Thank you!

         

        Jay

      • October 19, 2022 at 2:12 pm #49943

        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there, @jay-galea!! FANTASTIC WORK on the revisions – your profile really transformed.

          Put a space between this sentence and “essentially”:

          “I Can Help YOU Buy or Sell Property Leaving at the BEST PRICE!”

          Essentially…”

          //

          Try not to have every sentence begin with “i” — other than that, you are good to move on!! 🙂

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