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Hi @cindy-russo, it was wonderful speaking with you yesterday and welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:
Your profile photo is lovely but it’s a little blurry. Do you have a photo of higher quality you could upload? If not, please send it to our graphic designer and have her sharpen the photo a little bit as well as add a white background to it.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
Looks fantastic!!
About Section:
I really like your content but I want you to format it to more of a sales letter so that means using more “you” rather than “I”.
I would suggest even starting off your profile by asking 3 short and sweet pain point questions and then getting into how you help your clients!
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with following a guide.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Testimonials:
Remove the dates and shorten them down to 1-3 sentences each. Put a space between each testimonial.
Call to action (you need one at the end):
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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Hi there, @cindy-russo! WOW, your banner image has seriously transformed your page!! Love it.
Your entire about section not only has fantastic and gripping content… it also was super informative!!
Make sure that throughout your sales letter, if words in sentences do not need to be capitalized, please lowercase them. This will greatly assist with the readability.
Once you’ve made those tweaks, you are ready to move forward! Woohoo!!
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Oh I see what you’re saying!! You can keep it if you’d like to follow Kent’s 😉
Whatever you’re comfortable with – @cindy-russo but this looks great and you can move forward!
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