2 years, 7 months ago-
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https://www.linkedin.com/in/leahvolkov/
Please let me know if I am not posting in the right place. Thanks so much!
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@negeen-dargahi How do I get some feedback on my profile? I haven’t heard back from anyone and it’s been several days. Did I not post it in the right place? Thanks for the help!
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Hi @leah-volkov, my biggest apologies for the delay in a reply – we’ve been a little bit backed up on the profile request. Thank you so much for your patience in the meantime! Welcome to the program – below are my comments on your profile:
Profile Photo: very lovely photo – I’d like you to center the photo a bit more. Right now, there’s too much space above your head and to the right side of you. If you ever need a white background added, our graphic designer, Lindsey, can add that for you!
I don’t love your background banner image – the profile photo cuts off the door and I believe Lindsey can create something better for you! Please tell her what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline:
I really like what you have but I’m a little hesitant on the ENERGY & VISION part. Do you find that a lot of your clients are looking for homes that match their energy?
Want A Home That Matches Your Vision WITHOUT Paying Higher Prices? ☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞Message Me!
^ this is just an example because I really like what you have, it just needs to be cleaned up a bit.
About section:
Very nice job on this! I have a few tweaks i’d like to make.
Your first paragraph isn’t as gripping as the middle and last half of your profile. I’d like you to start off your profile with pain point questions and then you can lead them into what you do.
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Want _____ ?
Do you NEED _______ but don’t know where to begin?
If you answered yes, you came to the right person:
I help clients like YOU find a home that perfectly suits their needs, dreams, and desires.
Essentially…
My sellers are informed and reassured throughout the ENTIRE home selling process. I make the experience smooth, lucrative, even FUN!
Once you receive top dollar for your house, we can begin the journey of shopping for your dream home together!//
See how much better that flows?
You also need a call to action at the end after your testimonials:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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@negeen-dargahi Thanks for the feedback! Below is a link to the changes. Let me know if I missed anything.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/leahvolkov/
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Hi @leah-volkov! Thank you for implementing my feedback and submitting it for another review! Just a few small things:
Have you emailed Lindsey about the banner image?
Your headline looks so much better – I would just remove the double emojis. I would just have one and not two next to each other.
Your about section looks fantastic! The first paragraph could be broken up, which I fixed for you below. You can just copy and paste it. The emojis may need to be manually added.
Want a HOME that actually works for you? 🏡 Do you NEED a change but don’t know where to begin? 🔑
If you answered yes, you came to the right person! I help clients like YOU find a home that perfectly suits their needs, dreams, and desires.
Essentially…
(I just broke up the sentences a bit more)
Everything else looks great!!
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@negeen-dargahi I made those changes, and yes I did email Lindsey yesterday as well. Thank you!
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