Please review my new LinkedIn Profile

[Regina Puckett]

(2) Regina Puckett | LinkedIn

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Hey @regina-puckett! Great to have you here in the program with us! Below are my comments on your profile review:

Your profile photo is lovely but it’s very blurry. Do you have a photo of higher quality you could upload? Also, it’s a pinch too zoomed in. Please take a photo where the camera is at eye level and not angled so high. Then, you can email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and she can add a white background for you to make it look more elevated.

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

This looks good!! Please remove the “&” symbol and write out “and”.

About Section:

I like how you’re providing information in your sales letter but it seems like too much of the focus is on you and not enough about your client. Remember that for your sales letter, you want to talk about what you do, who you work with, and how you can help your clients.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

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