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Hi @gil-barkon-2 – Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
You NEED a profile photo and background photo – make sure to do that ASAP.
You can also email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.com
Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!Summary:
(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/sasannikookar/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
I like the information you provided, but let’s grab someone’s attention immediately with pain point questions.
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”- THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that. (which you do have)
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit! -
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http://www.linkedin.com/in/carolinegehretlanza-realtor
Please review my new LinkedIn Profile. Please make changes to it as well. Thank you.
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Hi @caroline-lanza!! First off, awesome job taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
I’d really like you to get a photo of you looking at the camera lens and smiling, zoom out a smidge 🙂
Headline (words under your name) — GREAT headline! You can also try this outline if you’d like:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!Summary:
(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/I like the information you provided, but you do need a LOT more content (refer or copy the examples):
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that. (which you do have)
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit! -
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Hi @frederick-braun! Great job taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Happy to provide your feedback:
You need a background photo – please email our graphic designer Lindsey@coredm.com and ask her to create one for you.
Headline (words under your name) — your headline needs to be a bit more specific with what services you provide. Try this outline:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/I like the information you provided!!! They just need a little more organization and it needs to be focused on HOW you can serve your clients 🙂
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that. (which you do have)
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit! -
Please review my Linked In profile.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/v-anthony-loffredo-34464111/
Thank you, Anthony
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Hi @v-anthony-loffredo! Here is my feedback on your profile!
Great profile photo! Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.comHeadline (words under your name) — I like what you have but it’s a little too loud. Try this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
The summary looks great 🙂
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