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Hi @barryshardemangmail-com! Nice job taking action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Great profile photo! Can you send it to our graphic designer and have her add a white background for you??
Headline:
This needs some work. It’s important to ONLY focus on either selling OR buying. Never both for your profile. How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
when you’re writing your testimonials, keep it SHORT. 1 sentence per testimonial.
You also need a better call to action. How about this:If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision 🙂
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