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Hi @glen-scharer!!
Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Great profile photo! Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.comShe can also create a background photo for you, if you’d like.
GREAT headline! Right to the point!
Summary:
(examples below that you can reference or get inspired by)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You have some good info but there could be more.
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitorsWho you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
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