Please review my linkedin profile

[Stacey Grant]

I have just made my first update to my profile.  Please review it and give me your feed back.  https://www.linkedin.com/in/stacey-ogg-grant

[n d]

Hi @stacey-grant!

Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

Great profile photo.

Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

So, I really had no idea what you did until I got to the middle of your profile. You really want to make it clear what you do. Follow this template or copy the outline some members have done in the examples below! I know you’re helping with retirement, just tweak it to best suit the focus of your business.

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

You don’t really have enough information and I’d like you to refer to those examples of what we want your profile to look like!

Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

• THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.

2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

 

 

[Roger Keeton]

 

 

Hello I would like to e mail the lady responsible for graphic designing .  Please post her email  thanks

[n d]

Hi @roger-keeton — her email is —> lindsey@coredm.com

 

[Stacey Grant]

Here is my revised profile for review.  https://www.linkedin.com/in/stacey-ogg-grant

[n d]

Looks great, @stacey-grant!! So much better! Make sure you put your call to action at the very end of your testimonial. Your testimonial is also quite long. Keep it to 1-2 sentences. Short and sweet 🙂 you’re good to move on. Nice!

 

[Roger Keeton]

 

 

Thanks Dargahi

I’ve spoken with lidsey. Also I would like to understand why I am recieving multiple post on my profile( post like the 1 abouve by stacey grant.

I have numerous post on my profile simular to these. why?

[n d]

Hi @roger-keeton, typically the forums have topics that people can post under like “review my profile” and this is a scenario where that has happened. Let me know if you’re still getting notifications.

 

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